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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Let me begin by saying i love how you composed this image and that the emotion evoked is brilliant!
My main critique for this image is that the traditional part, i think its watercolor, looks really rough. The paper texture in the background looks really out of place when contrasted with the digital addition of the white top and red petals. The way you changed the petals opacity to show depth is beautiful by the way
The anatomy is a bit stiff as well. Her elbows should come down to the mid waist and the forearms should be a bit longer. You can touch your shoulder with your fingers, so when straight up your fingers will pass the shoulder. here hers are barely even with her shoulder. Rounding your lines out in the arms and legs is the best way to avoid stiffness.
Overall this is a very well drawn and colored image and you are very skilled in combining mediums
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